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@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@ nothing else!
 ### Firefox First
 
 To tackle this I decided to fix things in stages and try to get old firefox
-working first. And to start I decided to pick Firefox 10, released in 2012.
-And this was a much better starting point since the website was still broken,
-but some styling was still working: ![Website FF10](public/blog/site2.jpg)
+working first. To start, I decided to pick Firefox 10, which was released in 2012.
+This was a much better starting point since eveb though the website was still broken,
+somee styling was still working: ![Website FF10](public/blog/site2.jpg)
 
 The background seemed to work, and images were loading, but fonts, font colors,
 and just the entire layout was broken.
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ For eamaple:
 }
 ```
 
-Now i only have to type `@linear-gradient(...)` and it will compile down to
+Now i only have to type `@linear-gradient(...)`, and it will compile down to
 all the vendor prefixes!
 
 #### what broke
@@ -94,9 +94,9 @@ Now some of you may see flex box styles in there and think:
 
 > Wait IE6 doesnt support Flex?!
 
-..and you would be correct. As I started getting FF3.5, then FF2 to work. Even
-more things broke. But as soon as I made the jump to suppot IE9, all hell broke
-loose.
+..and you would be correct. As I started fixing FF3.5, then FF2, even
+more things broke. I fixed those, but again, as soon as I made the jump to suppot IE9, 
+all hell broke loose.
 
 ### the layout
 
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ then apply that to every URL.
 
 Another things that IE6 doesnt support is fonts... kinda. It does not support
 TTF, OTF, WOFF, WOFF2, or any font format besides one called embedded opentype
-i.e. .eot. So all I had to do to fix that was generate eot font files from my
+(i.e. .eot). So all I had to do to fix that was generate eot font files from my
 ttf ones, and add those in. Now my font-family mixin looks like this:
 
 ```scss